subQuark

The value of an editor – for books and games!

2 comments

An editor is a necessity when publishing a book. Or at least in publishing a book that one hopes has some level of success.

Two million new books are published every year (wiki by country).

2,000,000

One way not to stand out is to have typos, poor grammar, and a host of other issues that a good editor will help alleviate.

Yes, an editor does cost but what’s the cost of having mistakes and a poorly written sentence? Or worse, confusing structure!

And there are different types of editors too. (nooo! a coordinate conjunction starting a sentence!) =p

Developmental editors help shape entire story arcs, change or restructure entire books, even add or remove characters. These editors are rare, and the least used, but if you ever have a chance to use one – wow! Mine is a beast! =)

She does her developmental edits with pencil and writes copious notes everywhere from between lines, to the margins, to the backs of pages. Some edits are easy such as “you already said this” or “if this is set today, drop this onomatopoeia – cameras no longer make these sounds” and some are more robust and challenging such as “how about placing this content on page 24″.

I cherish her edits and, even though they can be daunting to execute, they certainly improve my writing.

Then there’s content editing – more of a page-by-page, paragraph-to-paragraph look. For this French-Canadian, I appreciate this greatly. I resist writing in proper English since I’m writing in America but I do dislike zeds used in the place of an “s” and the loss of “u”s from colourful prose. *rolls eyes & realises I’m full of it*  =D

And, finally, copy editing – the last chance for true typos – a mundane task but ever so critical.

For books, the need for an editor is a clear and a long standing practice. For self-published indie authors, an editor is vital even if it’s in the form of friends (several). And here’s an idea if your budget is just too tight – put your book up in a Google Group!

Think that’s a nutty idea? It’s not mine, it’s what Guy Kawasaki did with his book titled APE.

So what about games?

Ah, that’s what prompted this blog post!

My fave online game reviewer Erin from The Geeky Gimp wrote a fair and detailed review Tabletop Game Review #5 – Paperback. She paints a full and detailed picture of the game – truly the next best thing to playing it first hand.

Her review was positive and she liked the game. However . . . one simple-to-correct thing stood out and it’s the kind of thing a good editor would have caught.

Is it a major thing?

That’s subjective and I’d be upset if I had this type of error in my filler mint tin games (filler is game-specific terminology and an example of “lingo” that should be defined, if used in instructions).

Terminology in Paperback’s instructions refer to something that isn’t a common phrase, even in the tabletop game world, or anything that can be found online. I also searched for the errant phrase, “length track”, and only came up with references to running! o_O

2014-05-29 07.33

nothing to do with this post – just stunning in the morning sun =)

Your game instructions shouldn’t require the internet unless you purposely tell players to see rich storyline instructions on your website. This would be in addition to the included instructions, not in lieu of them. Having players resort to an internet search to try to understand your game is as bad as a typo or poor grammar in a novel, except that game rules are much shorter than a novel!

Game instructions aren’t particularly fun to write but they are vital. They shape your players initial opinion of your game once they sit down to play it.

Don’t let instructions be an afterthought – they’re probably the first thing your players really look at. A professional editor’s time is well worth the cost.

A possible alternative to an editor, or maybe something to do before using an editor, is to spend $25 on The Game Crafter’s very cool service – Sanity tests. =)

Digg This
Reddit This
Stumble Now!
Buzz This
Vote on DZone
Share on Facebook
Bookmark this on Delicious
Kick It on DotNetKicks.com
Shout it
Share on LinkedIn
Bookmark this on Technorati
Post on Twitter
Google Buzz (aka. Google Reader)

Written by subquark

May 29th, 2014 at 9:31 am

Posted in games,publishing

Tagged with

2 Responses to 'The value of an editor – for books and games!'

Subscribe to comments with RSS

  1. Excellent article. And yes, editors are extremely crucial to board game design. It makes me sad when a potentially great game has a poor rule book :(

    Thanks again for the shout out :)

    Erin

    29 May 14 at 11:54 pm

  2. Thanks Erin for bringing something to light that is sometimes overlooked or taken for granted. =)

    David Miller

    30 May 14 at 11:04 am

Leave a Reply